living in a country where you have to speak forign language can cause serious problemls as well as practical problems. to what extend do you agree

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state with
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a different
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language
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will generate serious and practical problems. I
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with the statement since
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only
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to many problems that will affect the way
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immigrants
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as employment issues.
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with, many individuals come to another country mostly with a dream
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a better life that the former state did not provide.
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, foreigners seek
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in the new states because of higher payment.
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, most of them do not come with a lot of preparations
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such
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as not taking proficiency
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,
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,
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them look inadequate in the eyes of the recruiters, in turn, reducing
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opportunities for
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the applier
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.
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, it is really important to learn the
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of the country that one aims
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this
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problem doesn't occur and limit their
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life.
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, income inequality often comes from the limited
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the worker has. When
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limit
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opportunity and productivity, others with comprehensive
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can have more in their
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life
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making them produce more income than the ones who are not.
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example, one that speaks fluentlly
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easier
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time communicating with clients
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making them have more money coming.
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barrier
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often take a toll on
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career
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continuity. In conclusion,
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strongly
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that immigrants seeking
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better
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job
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jobs
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in other countries must have proficiency
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and prepare well before moving to the host country.
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barrier
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impacts a lot in many
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progress.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic hurdles
  • Cultural nuances
  • Social integration
  • Language proficiency
  • Income disparity
  • Multilingual environment
  • Language acquisition
  • Communication breakdown
  • Social alienation
  • Resilience
  • Bilingualism
  • Intercultural dialogue
  • Language education
  • Adaptability
  • Cultural adaptation
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