The table shows the number of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table indicates the
amount
of people that visited Ashdown Change the quantifier
number
Museum
a year
prior to the Museum
's refurbishment and the year
after it, while
the two pie charts represent the level of satisfaction from visitors
as a result
of a survey done in the two years.
Overall
, the table demonstrates that total
number of Change the article
a total
the total
visitors
to
once the renovation was done Change preposition
apply
outweights
the ones that went the previous Correct your spelling
outweighs
year
. We can clearly see from the pie charts that those that
entered the Correct pronoun usage
who
Museum
after it was refurbished were significantly more satisfied than the ones that
went before.
The table shows that there is a Correct pronoun usage
who
different
of almost 20.000 individuals going to the Ashton Replace the word
difference
Museum
after the refurbishment since 74.000 went into the building before it and 92.000 subsequently
.
The results of the surveys indicate that 40% of those 74.000 visitors
who went during the year
before the recondition felt dissastified
, whilst 30% reported being satisfied. Once the building went through the refurbishment, the satisfaction feeling overtook the dissatisfaction feeling since 40% out of the 92.000 Correct your spelling
dissatisfied
visitors
responded that they were satisfied, with only 15% showing dissatisfaction.Submitted by tamaracheroki on
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