The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the changes and development in Ryemouth from 1995 until now.

Overall

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, there are significant transformations in residential areas and economic facilities near the coastal area.

To begin

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with, recently there have been some improvements in housing areas and its facilities.

Firstly

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, the

neighborhood

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district has been expanded to the west field with several houses and roads added to it.

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, some sports arenas

such

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golf

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a golf

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field and two tennis courts

have

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apply

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been

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built in the green space located in the east of the housing area, which

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used to be

farmland

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a farmland

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and forest park in 1995. Turning to the changes in the amenities in the part of the southern space, the local fishing business has been turned into a culinary and hospitality business. The fishing harbour that was available in 1995 has been demolished

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the fish markets and shops along the coast road, and now the buildings have been shifted to restaurants and apartments.

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, the car park has been added to the hotel across the street in the southern-east part.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

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3 paragraphs

177 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

transformation
key features
contrasting
developments
alterations
enhancements
infrastructure
recreational facilities
emerging
adaptation
population growth
connectivity
accessibility
preserve
aesthetics
analytically
livability
notable facilities

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The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

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