The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
table demonstrates economic and social indicators for four countries
Canada
,
Japan
,
Peru
,
Zaire
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and Zaire
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.
According to
United Nations statistics. The Annual income per person in
Japan
1570
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US
dollar
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dollars
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and
that is
the highest income
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compared
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with the other countries,
on the other
hand
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the lowest
country
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country's
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income is
Zaire
130 USD for each person that significant difference.
Canada
lesser
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is less
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than
Japan
11100
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by 11100
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US
dollar
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dollars
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,
Peru
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and Peru
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is up than
Zaire
by 30 recording 160. The life expectancy at birth in
Canada
is the second highest 76
in addition
it is lower than
Japan
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in Japan
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that
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apply
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reflects
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reflecting
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influence
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wages
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,
Zaire
is the lowest and
Peru
is higher than
Zaire
.
Canada
recorded the uttermost number in the daily calorie supply per person 3326, Which lower than
Canada
is
Japan
2846, The second lowest
Peru
,
Zaire
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the lowest country.
Canada
and
Japan
recorded the same percentage in adult literacy rate 99 per cent,
Peru
68 per cent ,
Zaire
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34 per cent.
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