The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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The

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map illustrates a sports

center

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university

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a university

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from 1990 to the present day.

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it is clear that

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the map

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undergone several changes including the

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of new

amenties

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amenities

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specific

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as the basketball

court

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, a new line has been drawn separating the

court

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and the other facilities today. Regarding the western area of the map, the park has been eradicated in order to make room for new basketball courts. As for the car park, the area has been replaced with a tennis

court

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, with the building of two more courts available. As for the remaining area, the coffee shop, which is adjacent to the outdoor pool, remained

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in the location till today,

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the pool has changed from using indoor to outdoor activities. / Evidently, a new fitness

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has been built in the location of the old tennis

court

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, with it being close to a changing room that has just moved from the coffee shop

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Submitted by ieltsamiedu on Fri Dec 29 2023

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats human face in 21 st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some possible solutions.

With growing number of populations in cities. Many people are living in small homes that don't have outdoor spaces. Is this is a positive or negative development?

In some countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?