The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps demonstrate the changes planned for upgrading
Norbiton
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the Norbiton
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industrial area in the future.
Overall
,it can be seen that the site will witness notable developments down the
road
.Some new buildings are expected to be constructed,
besides
the addition of new roads and a bridge over the river in order to access the facilities easily. As it is clear, there is a square in the
center
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centre
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of the current Norbiton site which is likely to remain unchanged and a smaller one will be added to the south of it. A school has been placed
at the end
of the east
road
and they consider a playground as a recreation area for children on the north of
this
road
next to the river. They are going to add some other facilities
such
as a medical centre and shops on the south side of the main square.Another significant transformation for
this
industrial area is expanding it to the other side of the river by constructing a bridge,
also
they will build a large factory in
this
new part.
Moreover
, the buildings on the left-hand are expected to be relocated by a new
road
.
Therefore
, it is apparent that in the future
this
industrial site will be extended dramatically.
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  • industrial area
  • future development
  • residential neighborhood
  • housing complexes
  • green spaces
  • parks and playgrounds
  • quality of life
  • amenities
  • self-sufficient community
  • main road
  • pedestrian walkways
  • cycling paths
  • alternative modes of transportation
  • connecting roads
  • new bridges
  • accessibility
  • transportation links
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