the pic charts illustrates the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or car
A glance at the pie diagram above presents the causes why society chooses to go to the office by bicycle or car.
Overall
, there are 5 aspects of each type of vehicle which are chosen by workers. Mostly, those who choose cycling consider health fitness and less pollution at 30%, while
those who go to work by auto concerned
more about comfort at 40%.
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are concerned
According to
the data, besides
health and less pollution, people tend to decide to cycle because of its easiness such
as no parking problems at 15% and no costs at 13%. Moreover
, they assume going by bicycle is faster than automobile are around 12%. Furthermore
, workers who prefer driving considering the distance to their office are approximately 21% which is the second biggest reason why people travel to work by automobile. Followed by other aspects which are at 14% such
as the need to carry things faster than cycling.
To conclude
, the greatest number of employees who decide to go to work by cycling is 30% which consists of health fitness and fewer pollution factors. Meanwhile, those who like driving which is around 40% want to get the comfort of using a car.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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