The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.

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The map depicts information about the changes

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that occured

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occured

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occurred

in the coastal

village

of Seaville between 1980

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and

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2010.

Overall

, lots of development can be noticed in the

village

between 1980 to 2010. New premises are built

such

as houses,

restaurant

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restaurants

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hotel

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hotels

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, golf

course

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courses

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and boat

club

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clubs

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. The

village

has

trnasformed

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transformed

completely over the span of 30 years. Beginning with the woodland, it

has been

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was

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developed

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into

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a golf course in 2010. Permanent Houses are constructed on the marsh. The holiday cottages

has

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have

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been shifted from

left

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the left

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side of the

village

to the right side. The Tea room has been transformed into

restaurant

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a restaurant

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over the

30 years

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30-year

span. A hotel has been constructed on the sand

dunnes

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dunes

Dunnes

. The retirement

village

has been constructed on the north side of the

village

and

new

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a new

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road has been

contructed betweeen

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constructed between

east

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the east

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bank and the retirement

village

. A new boat club has been developed on the bank of

river

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the river

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. The

village

has

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transformed

trnasformed

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transformed

completely over the span of 30 years

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
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21Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

165 words

6.00

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

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