The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.

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The map depicts information about the changes

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that occured

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occured

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occurred

in the coastal

village

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of Seaville between 1980

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and

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2010.

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, lots of development can be noticed in the

village

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between 1980 to 2010. New premises are built

such

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as houses,

restaurant

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restaurants

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hotel

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hotels

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, golf

course

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courses

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and boat

club

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clubs

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. The

village

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has

trnasformed

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transformed

completely over the span of 30 years. Beginning with the woodland, it

has been

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was

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developed

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into

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a golf course in 2010. Permanent Houses are constructed on the marsh. The holiday cottages

has

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have

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been shifted from

left

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the left

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side of the

village

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to the right side. The Tea room has been transformed into

restaurant

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a restaurant

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over the

30 years

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30-year

span. A hotel has been constructed on the sand

dunnes

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dunes

Dunnes

. The retirement

village

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has been constructed on the north side of the

village

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and

new

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a new

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road has been

contructed betweeen

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constructed between

east

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the east

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bank and the retirement

village

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. A new boat club has been developed on the bank of

river

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the river

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. The

village

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has

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transformed

trnasformed

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transformed

completely over the span of 30 years

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words village with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

165 words

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The maps illustrate remarkable transformations in the coastal village of Seaville over a 30-year period, starting from 1980.

Crime rates are increasing in the recent years in all countries and it is becoming more violent . Why do you think is? What can be done for it?

Some people think that the government should use extra money to fund programs to improve the environment. Others think that it is better for the government to spend money to support artistic programs. Which option do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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Small businesses are disappearing and being replaced by large multinational companies. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.