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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
#minutes #waste #garden #fertilizer #compost #summaries #information #features #comparisons
This
 cycle
depict
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depicts
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 the way in which garden fertilizer is made from recycling
orgabic
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organic
 waste.
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that the process consists of 5 steps, from preparing the
container
 to harvesting the final product. In the first stages,
empty
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an empty
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container
 is provided with a volume of 2m^3 on which air can
circulated
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circulate
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 freely.
Next,
it
filled
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is filled
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 with
variaties
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varieties
 of natural wastes namely food crap, newspaper and grass
in
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apply
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layer by layer. every layer
are
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is
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 15 centimeter
height
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in height
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. After that, Nitrogen and hot water are poured
consitutively
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constitutively
consecutively
 into the
container
 that later will be sealed.
The nitrogen
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Nitrogen
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 and water act as the ingredients that help the fermentation in
recycle
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the recycling
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 process. The heat and
also
vapor
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vapour
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are
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is
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 generated from the wastes inside the
container
. The recycling process will
last
 for six months.
Finally
, all the final product called compost is accumulated
in
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at
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a
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the
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 bottom.
This
 compost will later
use
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be used
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 to fertilize the
plans
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plants
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 in the garden.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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