You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
This
cycle depict
the way in which garden fertilizer is made from recycling Change the verb form
depicts
orgabic
waste. Correct your spelling
organic
Overall
, it is clearly apparent that the process consists of 5 steps, from preparing the container
to harvesting the final product.
In the first stages, empty
Correct article usage
an empty
container
is provided with a volume of 2m^3 on which air can circulated
freely. Wrong verb form
circulate
Next,
it filled
with Add a missing verb
is filled
variaties
of natural wastes namely food crap, newspaper and grass Correct your spelling
varieties
in
layer by layer. every layer Change preposition
apply
are
15 centimeter Change the verb form
is
height
. After that, Nitrogen and hot water are poured Change preposition
in height
consitutively
into the Correct your spelling
constitutively
consecutively
container
that later will be sealed.
The nitrogen
and water act as the ingredients that help the fermentation in Correct article usage
Nitrogen
recycle
process. The heat and Wrong verb form
the recycling
also
vapor
Change the spelling
vapour
are
generated from the wastes inside the Change the verb form
is
container
. The recycling process will last
for six months. Finally
, all the final product called compost is accumulated in
Change preposition
at
a
bottom. Correct article usage
the
This
compost will later use
to fertilize the Wrong verb form
be used
plans
in the garden.Correct your spelling
plants
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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