This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.

This graph shows the proportion of four different materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
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The following data illustrates the recycling rate percentage of four types of materials between 1982 and 2010 in a specific country.
Paper
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and
glass
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containers
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have been used since 1982
while
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aluminium cans and plastics became popular several years later.
Paper
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and
glass
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containers
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started their usage in 1982 at the level of 65% and 50% respectively. In the following period,
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paper
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reached its peak in 1994 at 80%
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glass
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containers
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experienced a slight decrease to 40% in 1990.
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, both of them had different fluctuations until 2010 when
paper
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dropped to 70%
while
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glass
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containers
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continued to grow steadily to 60%. Aluminium cans and plastics were continuously increased but had
a different patterns
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a different pattern
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. Aluminium cans surge rapidly from the level of 5% in 1986 to 45% in 2010 with no experience of drop.
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, plastics have been stable since it was first introduced starting at the level of 3% in 1990 and still below 10% until 2010.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paper, glass, containers with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • recycled
  • materials
  • percentage
  • paper and cardboard
  • glass
  • plastic
  • metal
  • stable
  • noticeable
  • rise
  • significant increase
  • accounting for
  • consistent
  • ste steadily
  • dramatically
  • nearly
  • worth noting
  • relatively low
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