You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The given picture illustrates the series of steps involved
to
producing Change preposition
in
compost
from recycling the organic household waste
.
Overall
, the whole procedure for make
garden fertilizer entails a total of five steps, starting with Change the verb form
making
prepare
Change the verb form
preparing
plastic
Correct article usage
a plastic
container
. Moreover
, the process requires several ingridients
and Correct your spelling
ingredients
take
Correct subject-verb agreement
takes
minimum
of six months until the Add an article
a minimum
compost
ready
to harvest.
In terms of making the Add a missing verb
is ready
compost
, first
thing that Add an article
the first
necessary
Add a missing verb
is necessary
need
is a big plastic Replace the word
needed
container
with the
size Correct article usage
a
2 meter
square with four Add a hyphen
2-meter
hole
for air circulation. Change to a plural noun
holes
Then
, it can be fill
with several Change the verb form
be filled
type
of Change to a plural noun
types
waste
, start
with the first layer Verb problem
apply
is
food, grass and Wrong verb form
being
last
newspaper. All of the waste
must be filled at least 15cm each
layer. After that, the Change preposition
in each
container
poured
with nitrogen and hot water to accelerate the composting process.
Regarding the four stages, the Add a missing verb
was poured
container
must tightly
sealed and the Add a missing verb
be tightly
heat
gas Change the verb form
heated
came
out Wrong verb form
comes
trough
the hole. Correct your spelling
through
Finally
, after six month
of fermentating the organic Change to a plural noun
months
waste
, the compost
is ready to harvest and used for garden
.Correct article usage
the garden
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words compost, waste, container with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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