You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost). Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The diagram below shows how to recycle organic waste to produce garden fertilizer (compost).

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing Task 1
The given picture illustrates the series of steps involved
to
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in
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producing
compost
from recycling the organic household
waste
.
Overall
, the whole procedure for
make
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garden fertilizer entails a total of five steps, starting with
prepare
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preparing
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plastic
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a plastic
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container
.
Moreover
, the process requires several
ingridients
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ingredients
and
take
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minimum
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a minimum
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of six months until the
compost
ready
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is ready
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to harvest. In terms of making the
compost
,
first
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the first
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thing that
necessary
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is necessary
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need
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needed
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is a big plastic
container
with
the
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a
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size
2 meter
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2-meter
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square with four
hole
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holes
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for air circulation.
Then
, it can
be fill
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be filled
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with several
type
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types
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of
waste
,
start
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apply
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with the first layer
is
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being
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food, grass and
last
newspaper. All of the
waste
must be filled at least 15cm
each
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in each
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layer. After that, the
container
poured
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was poured
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with nitrogen and hot water to accelerate the composting process. Regarding the four stages, the
container
must
tightly
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be tightly
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sealed and the
heat
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gas
came
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comes
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out
trough
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through
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the hole.
Finally
, after six
month
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months
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of fermentating the organic
waste
, the
compost
is ready to harvest and used for
garden
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the garden
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.
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words compost, waste, container with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycle
  • organic waste
  • garden fertilizer
  • compost
  • diagram
  • main features
  • comparisons
  • overview
  • collection
  • shredding
  • mixing
  • addition
  • water
  • bacteria
  • turning
  • aerating
  • pile
  • maturation
  • filtering
  • final product
  • before and after
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