The charts below show the percentage of students joining North West University.
The two pie charts illustrate the rate of undergraduates who
selected
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were selected
North West
University's seven faculties and how many non-US learners are in the Add a hyphen
North-West
art
faculty.
Overall
, art
was the most significant faculty at North West University while
medicine made up the smallest part of the chart. In addition
to that, out of all art
students South Americans are the biggest group and Africans are the smallest group in the academy.
It is clear, that the art
students made up 23% as the large proportion while
computing and science are taking second and third places respectively. It has a mere 1% difference between these 3 faculties. Medicine is the faculty which belongs the
lowest amount of learners and it is 5%. Change preposition
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Moreover
, 14% of puils
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pupils
while
9% of undergraduates are studying engineering.
The largest group of scholars are from South America as 79% select art
as their higher studies. Additionally
, Europeans are 21% in this
same department and Asians and Australians are 6% and 4% respectively.Submitted by ranasinghenadeeshani07 on
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