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The chart below shows the changes in the average price in the UK from 1998 to 2018

The chart below shows the changes in the average price in the UK from 1998 to 2018
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The graph gives information about the percentage
change
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of
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in
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 the average
price
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 in the UK compared to a number of countries
wordlwide
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worldwide
within two decades. In summary, the UK
were
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become
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 more expensive as the inflation happened in the other three countries: the USA, Spain, and Japan.
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, it was applied reversedly in Germany which had its
price
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 lower than before. In the first five years, the UK had its
price
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 normally at above negative 5
change
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, before it significantly surged
to
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 far above 10 in the next
half decade
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. The other countries with negative
change
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 namely the USA and Japan, with difference minus 5 and over -5 respectively, experienced a positive growth. The USA doubled the
price
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until
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 five,
whereas
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 Japan has a marginal climb to minus 5. Spain,
on the other hand
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, started from just over zero to almost five within 20 years. The only country with
negative
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a negative
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 trend is Germany, which got their
stuffs
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stuff
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 cheaper by
price
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change
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 from almost 5 to just above zero.
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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, price with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Average price
  • Fluctuations
  • Significant increase/decrease
  • Stability
  • Inflation rate
  • Economic recession
  • Taxation
  • Consumer impact
  • Trend analysis
  • Sector-specific trends
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Price index
  • Consumer Price Index (CPI)
  • Purchasing power
  • Economic indicators
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