The table below gives give information about salaries of secondary/high school teachers in five countries in 2009
The given table provides information for both secondary and high school teachers' salaries amount in USD within five distinct nations, namely,
Australia
, Denmark, Luxenberg, Korea, and Japan in 2009 overall
the most striking part would be that the greatest amount of salary
belonged to the Luxenberg with 112 thousand USD annually, however
in Luxenberg it taken 30 years
for teachers to reach top salary
, which is approximately three times greater compared to Australia
buried only take nine years
to reach top salary
. Additionally
, it is noticeable that, although
the mentioned country had the advantage of reaching the top salary
, within just nine years
, it has the lowest salary
per year with 48,000 USD as can be seen from the figure secondary in high school teachers in Luxembourg had the maximum salary
of 139,000 while
the amount was nearly 1/3 in Australia
with 48,000 furthermore
, Korea had the longest period to reach top salary
with 37 years
, whereas
, in Denmark, it only took eight years
moreover
, it is illustrated that in both Australia
and Denmark, reaching top salary
, was possible by working less than 10 years
, unlike the other areas were the numbers were roughly 4 times bigger.Submitted by maryam.niknamm on
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