The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.

The table gives information about enrollment of students in Manchester University in 1937, 1963 and 2017.
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The diagram above provides data regarding the enrollment of Manchester University students in 1937, 1963, and 2017. The number of students that registered at Manchester University has always increased following the period. The gender proportion of enrolled scholars was continuously fluctuating,
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there's a phenomenon of constant rise in overseas enrollers compared to the gradually decreased portion of people that live near Manchester. 1937 saw a low start of learners that enrolled in the university until it rose significantly to above 6000 by 2017.
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, the number of females had been fluctuated based on the 3-year comparison with the range of above 30% to under 60%. Showing a similar trend, males hit the highest share of 65% and the lowest in just under half of the total register.
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, a dramatic drop of young adults that came from within 40 miles of the city had been experienced from 1937 to 2017 from 55% to a very small number under 5%,
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multinational undergraduates cumulatively contributed to a higher rate of percentage. In the first period, enrollers came from only 6% of 4 regions until they reached a peak of almost a third from 102 regions in 2017.
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