The table below shows the numbers of visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.

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of individuals who visited Ashdown Museum a year before and after it was renovated. The pie charts were divided into five categories, very satisfied, satisfied, dissatisfied, very dissatisfied, and no response. They compare the amount of people's satisfaction after and before the renovation. At first glance, the

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of

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after refurbishment dramatically increased and most of them were satisfied despite a year before refurbishment which a great

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of them were dissatisfied. It can be seen that during

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of

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rose from 74000 to 92000. The segment related to very dissatisfied people became half which was negligible. Numerous

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declared their dissatisfaction at 40 which fell to 15 after one year.

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the renovation. Just over a third and two-fifths of individuals who visited

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gallery were very satisfied and satisfied respectively.

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the figures for these people in the past were 15 and a little less than a third.