Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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and can
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people
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persuade
while
others say this
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an advisitor
advisitor
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a visitor
visitor
want
to advert some Correct subject-verb agreement
wants
people
, probably they forget to be honest and care about money more while
some people
definitely need to
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apply
this
advertising because they are'nt
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aren't
about
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of
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the variety
products
. In this
essay, both aspects of this
subject will be explored.
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, feeling
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the feeling
population
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the population
beautifull
words. Correct your spelling
beautiful
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, some of
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the advisor
advisor
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advisors
probabely
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probably
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, to
be
honest about what they want to say, and Wrong verb form
being
this
can have terrible
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a terrible
mind
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minds
to
choose their way without advertising. Correct pronoun usage
them to
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, some shopper
would rather Fix the agreement mistake
shoppers
compelling person
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be compelled
they
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if they
induce
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are induced
people
. Although
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being
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is needed
debateable
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debatable
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, i
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the succes
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success
at
the persuading population.
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people
extremely need to
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apply
this
can help them to make a
right decision owing to Correct article usage
the
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being unaware
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of
products
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, every goods
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good
special
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a special
use
, that all of citizens
should be considered. Add an article
the citizens
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, they need to be familliar
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familiar
about
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with
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to Correct your spelling
routes
use
correctly
. Correct pronoun usage
them correctly
For instance
, the first time when people
buy a computer, they can't use
of
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apply
this
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these
products
accurately, so with the right advertising about buying and using these things, they can prevent to injure
them.
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injuring
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, i
agree with Change the capitalization
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of advertising because some Add an article
the success
people
definitelly
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definitely
use
or buy different products
. However
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have to Fix the agreement mistake
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consider
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of customers and be honest to Fix the agreement mistake
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grab
attention
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the attention
people
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