The chart below shows the changes in the average price in the UK from 1998 to 2018

These charts illustrate the price variation in the UK and several other countries over two decades.

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, between the period of 1990 to 1995, countries including Britain, the USA, and Tokyo had low economic indicators

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only Spain and Germany had a low percentage of price change. But, in-between 1996 to 2002, all the percentages were inverted except Tokyo.

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, significant price changes can be seen in New York within 10 years.

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, a slightly increasing trend can be observed in the financial state of Spain, and the difference is nearly two

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, approximately a two

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decrease can be visualized in Germany.

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, a drastically increasing trend can be seen in the prices of items in London may be

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the reason of economic crisis and inflation.

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, all five countries have had different economic changes during the past twenty years of time

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the above information.

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Dec 31, 2023

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Topic Vocabulary:

Average price
Fluctuations
Significant increase/decrease
Stability
Inflation rate
Economic recession
Taxation
Consumer impact
Trend analysis
Sector-specific trends
Peak
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Price index
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