The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below The chart below shows participation in certain leisure activities by children in Australia. Write a report describing the information shown below
The bar graph depicts
percentage
of free-time Add an article
the percentage
activites
Correct your spelling
activities
which
the Change preposition
in which
particiants
are Correct your spelling
participants
boys
and girls
by 5 to 14 year olds
in Australia. There are 5 different activities to do when they have a spare time. Add a hyphen
14-year-olds
Overall
, the most popular event is either watching television or videos for both girls
and boys
, while
the unpopular events are skatebording
for children and art or craft for Correct your spelling
skateboarding
boys
.
Looking in more detail, A lot of children watching
TV/ videos as a hobby. It is up to approximately one hundred Wrong verb form
watch
percent
of them like to watch. Change the spelling
per cent
The
second favorite leisure activity is playing electronic or computer games. Around 80% of man-child love to play computer games, Change the word
My
whereas
the girls
get the opposite, at 60%. It is almost similar with ride
a bike, Change preposition
to riding
boys
get around 75% and girls
only sixty
percent.
Meanwhile, playing Correct your spelling
60
skateboard
or Wrong verb form
skateboarding
rollerblade
and making art or craft are not the Wrong verb form
rollerblading
favorite
things to do. for Change the spelling
favourite
boys
. Just over half percent
of daughters Change the spelling
per cent
making
art and craft in their leisure time, in the contrary there is only 40% of sons. At the same time, playing skateboard Wrong verb form
make
dominated
by man-child.Add a missing verb
is dominated
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Vocabulary: Replace the words boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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