The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The
given
diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of making chocolate.
It can be seen that the process has a number of different stages, starting from planting cacao trees and ending with distributing to consumers.
Looking at the picture in detail, one can see that the main material is cacao pods. The first stage is when cacao trees are cultivated and cared for in South America, Africa, and Indonesia for a certain period of time. After enough time, ripe red pods are harvested, and white cocoa Verb problem
apply
beans
will be used to make products. Use synonyms
Next,
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this
step involved fermenting Linking Words
beans
by composting them in banana leaves.
Once the above steps have been finished, they are able to start spreading in the sun to dry for a sufficient time. Use synonyms
After
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this
step is complete, workers will put them in large sacks and use a scale to accurately check the required weight before transporting them by train or lorry to the factory to prepare for the next steps. Following that, Linking Words
beans
are roasted by a griller assist Use synonyms
this
period, Linking Words
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then
Correct word choice
and then
crushing
the Verb problem
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beans
and Use synonyms
removing
Wrong verb form
removed
the
outer shell. The final step is when liquid chocolate is produced by pressing the inner part and Change preposition
from the
delivered
to users.Replace the word
delivering it
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