The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram shows how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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diagram illustrates the steps and equipment involved in the process of making chocolate. It can be seen that the process has a number of different stages, starting from planting cacao trees and ending with distributing to consumers. Looking at the picture in detail, one can see that the main material is cacao pods. The first stage is when cacao trees are cultivated and cared for in South America, Africa, and Indonesia for a certain period of time. After enough time, ripe red pods are harvested, and white cocoa
beans
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will be used to make products.
Next,
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this
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step involved fermenting
beans
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by composting them in banana leaves. Once the above steps have been finished, they are able to start spreading in the sun to dry for a sufficient time.
After
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step is complete, workers will put them in large sacks and use a scale to accurately check the required weight before transporting them by train or lorry to the factory to prepare for the next steps. Following that,
beans
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are roasted by a griller assist
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period,
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then
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crushing
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the
beans
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and
removing
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removed
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the
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outer shell. The final step is when liquid chocolate is produced by pressing the inner part and
delivered
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delivering it
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to users.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words beans with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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