The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals I different parts of the world. Sumarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The given graph compares the number of international
tourists
in 5 different countries from 1995 to 2010.
Generally speaking, the USA had the highest number of international Use synonyms
tourists
among these countries, and the number of Use synonyms
tourists
who visited France during Use synonyms
this
period increased rapidly. So, France as a tourist destination become more popular over time.
Linking Words
Initially
, in 1995, more than 70 Linking Words
million
international Use synonyms
tourists
travelled Use synonyms
the
USA Change preposition
to the
while
just above 30 Linking Words
million
Use synonyms
tourists
travelled to France. Brazil and Egypt had less than 10 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
tourists
Use synonyms
this
year compared to Linking Words
the
just above 20 Correct article usage
apply
million
Use synonyms
tourists
in Malaysia. Over the period, the total Use synonyms
Use synonyms
tourists
Correct quantifier usage
number of tourists
visited
these 5 countries increased with some slight fluctuations.Correct pronoun usage
who visited
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