The bar chart gives infornamtion about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.
The chart illustrates the amount of
car
journeys
that the residents
and non-residents
made to the city centre.
Overall
, from 1996 to 1997, residents
' vehicle journeys
showed a steady number
while
non-residents
continued to rise rapidly. However
, this
situation changed when two major events occurred, that are the introduction of parking meters and the closing of Westgate Street and Park Lane due to
traffic. The high number
of vehicle journeys
in the past has now declined.
The introduction of parking meters in 2000 showed a dramatic change in residents
' car
journeys
, making the average number
go from approximately 9000 to 5000 each day. However
, non-residents
average car
number
remained steady at around 8000 journeys
per day.
When traffic closed Westgate Street and Park Lane in 2003, residents
journeys
slightly decreased from 5000 to 4000. but later stabilised. Changes can be seen in non-resident
Correct article usage
the non-resident
car
journey as it fell drastically from 8000 to 3000.Submitted by ieltswriting91 on
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