The map below shows the plan of a museum in 1998 and after some changes were made in it in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below depicts the view of the museum in 1998 and

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some changes after its development in the next two decades.

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, the picture shows that the permanent exhibition rooms were smaller but

it

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had more public facilities to enjoy. The visualization details that the museum had big permanent exhibition rooms on the right and left

side

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sides

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of the building.

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,

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20 years later, the areas were only on the right side. When we went

the

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museum from the

entrace

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entrance

/exit door, we would find the shop on the right side, but in 2008 it was relocated

on

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the left with the bags &

coats

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and coats

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room in the next space. Keeping forward from the gate, there was a garden that in 2008 was developed to be more beautiful with the fountains and cafe sitting area on the corner.

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, the cafe was not

big

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as before but,

this

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construction had a restaurant which could

make

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give

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the visitors

had

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more options for

the

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foods

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food

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and drinks. In the previous, temporary

exhbition

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exhibition

was on the corner, but

then

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was enlarged near to the in-house park.