The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate how the public Central Library, situated on the floor, changed over a 20-year period. There was considerable development of the settlement process over these years and it was gradually transformed from a traditional Library to a digitalized bookhouse. The most notable change is the children's books place which was replaced by the lecture
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today.
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, the Enquiry desk area, which provided services,
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as tickets and book returns 20 years ago, was changed to three self-service machines.
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room
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was changed by a Cafe. Another significant transformation is the reading
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, which was returned to the computer
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these days, where can visitors read digitalized books
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of papered books.
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, the area of the
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that is
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servicing storytelling events today was enlarged a twice its original size.
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, it increases the interactions and imaginations between children and other joiners rather than CDs, videos and computer games.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words room with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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