The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The images illustrate the current layout of the Norbiton industrial area, alongside the future redevelopment plan.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the plans depict significant changes in facilities, including the introduction of houses and public facilities, extending the roads, and relocating the factory and farmland. At present, the town is tranquil. Only eight factories exist, which surround the streets and roundabouts in the centre.
On the other hand
, there is farmland on the side of a long river in the north.
Conversely
, the area will become more lively in the future.
For instance
, some houses will be built to replace the factories, and the farmland will be moved. It will
also
establish common facilities
such
as shops, a medical centre, a large playground, and a school. Since those buildings are included in the development plan, they need to extend the roads. Later on, the roadway will
also
expand through the river. In conclusion,
instead
of an industrial area only, the town will be more human-friendly in the future.
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  • industrial area
  • planned future development
  • factories
  • warehouses
  • railway line
  • shopping center
  • residential buildings
  • college
  • mixed-use zone
  • commercial
  • residential
  • educational
  • green spaces
  • pedestrian walkways
  • housing
  • community
  • retail services
  • revitalize
  • quality of life
  • vibrant
  • sustainable
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