The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The images illustrate the current layout of the Norbiton industrial area, alongside the future redevelopment plan.

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it is clear that

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the plans depict significant changes in facilities, including the introduction of houses and public facilities, extending the roads, and relocating the factory and farmland. At present, the town is tranquil. Only eight factories exist, which surround the streets and roundabouts in the centre.

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, there is farmland on the side of a long river in the north.

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, the area will become more lively in the future.

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, some houses will be built to replace the factories, and the farmland will be moved. It will

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establish common facilities

such

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as shops, a medical centre, a large playground, and a school. Since those buildings are included in the development plan, they need to extend the roads. Later on, the roadway will

also

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expand through the river. In conclusion,

instead

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of an industrial area only, the town will be more human-friendly in the future.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

168 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

industrial area
planned future development
factories
warehouses
railway line
shopping center
residential buildings
college
mixed-use zone
commercial
residential
educational
green spaces
pedestrian walkways
housing
community
retail services
revitalize
quality of life
vibrant
sustainable

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The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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