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The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.

The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
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The bar chart illustrates the
value
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 of global sales in the billions of four different types of digital
games
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 throughout six years in a row from 2000. In the six-
year
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 period given, the selling of handheld
games
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 always led the game industry.
This
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 figure moderately increased from slightly under 12
billion
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Dollars
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 in the first
year
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 to almost 18
billion
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Dollars
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 in the final
year
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.
Conversely
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, console
games
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 show a downtrend to only around 3
billion
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Dollars
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 in 2006, which is half of the initial
value
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. Online
games
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 appeared for the first time in 2001 and experienced a constant increase to around 9
billion
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Dollars
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 by the end of the period, which is the
second highest
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second-highest
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 sales
value
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. A
year
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 after online
games
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 appeared, mobile phone
games
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 started to sell and were directly equal
with
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to
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 the
value
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 of online
games
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.
This
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 number grew gradually and reached about 7
billion
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Dollars
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 in five years.
Overall
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, handheld
games
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 had the biggest sales in each
year
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 given.
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, handheld
games
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, online
games
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, and mobile phone
games
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 increased moderately throughout the period given.
On the other hand
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, only console
games
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 underwent a decrease.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, games, billion, dollars, year with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderately" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Global sales
  • Digital games
  • Trends
  • Emergence
  • Decline
  • Console games
  • Handheld games
  • Popularity
  • Steady increase
  • Online games
  • Mobile phone games
  • Technological advancements
  • Consumer behavior
  • Subsequent growth
  • Noticeable changes
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