The chart below shows the global sales of different kinds of digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The bar chart illustrates the
value
of global sales in the billions of four different types of digital games
throughout six years in a row from 2000.
In the six-year
period given, the selling of handheld games
always led the game industry. This
figure moderately increased from slightly under 12 billion
Dollars
in the first year
to almost 18 billion
Dollars
in the final year
. Conversely
, console games
show a downtrend to only around 3 billion
Dollars
in 2006, which is half of the initial value
.
Online games
appeared for the first time in 2001 and experienced a constant increase to around 9 billion
Dollars
by the end of the period, which is the second highest
sales Add a hyphen
second-highest
value
. A year
after online games
appeared, mobile phone games
started to sell and were directly equal with
the Change preposition
to
value
of online games
. This
number grew gradually and reached about 7 billion
Dollars
in five years.
Overall
, handheld games
had the biggest sales in each year
given. In addition
, handheld games
, online games
, and mobile phone games
increased moderately throughout the period given. On the other hand
, only console games
underwent a decrease.Submitted by wynneetanisia on
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