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Band 7.5

You have just read an article in a national newspaper which claims that Darwin centres in your country or look very similar to each other. You do not fully agree with this opinion. Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper. In your letter Say which points in the article you agree with Explain ways in which your town centre is different from most other town centres Over to give a guided tour of your town to the writer of the article

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Dear Mr, I am writing
this
 letter to tell you my opinion about an article in the newspaper, some town centres it is similar, but my town centre has a great difference. As you know, some points I agree with you like whether in my hometown and the government’s designed all these towns are the same look like.
As well as
, the people in the place who can change any place if they want. I would be grateful if you would that buildings, museums, private schools and some companies it will a magnificent different from most others.
In addition
, the wall of the town has been drawn by handcraft to tell any visitors about these folks. I need to require you to spend some days in my city and we will prepare a guided tour on your trip to watch
this
 culture and take a look at our traditions, we would be delighted if you make a decision and visit us. I look forward to receiving your response. Best regards, Monirah
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the letter has a clear introduction, a logical development of ideas in the body, and a suitable conclusion. Add headers if necessary to enhance organization.
coherence cohesion
Begin the letter with an appropriate greeting such as 'Dear Editor' and close it with a formal sign-off such as 'Sincerely' or 'Yours faithfully' to meet the conventions of letter writing.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea to improve clarity and cohesion. The second paragraph contains several ideas that could be split up.
task achievement
Address all bullet points from the task clearly. Expand your points with examples or explanations to fully cover the task requirements.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and suitable tone throughout the letter. In a formal letter to an editor, a respectful and objective tone is more appropriate.
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