The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.

The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.
The provided maps depict the plan for changes to the
school
site
in two separate years: 2004 and 2024.
Overall
, it is clearly observable that by 2024, the
school
site
will have undergone dramatic changes. Not only will green spaces be changed, but
also
buidlings will have been experienced advancements. In 2004, there were only two
school
buildings in
this
area: one in the center, and the other in the north of the
site
.
However
, by 2024, a new
school
building will be constructed in palce of the sport field, which used to be located to the east of the
school
building 1.
This
development will increase the capacity of the
school
; the figure for student who will study in
this
place will have experienced a growth to 1000. It is worth noting that three
school
buildings are going to be liked by the path. By 2024, the sports field will be relocated in the east of the area, and its size will not be as large as it used to be.
Moreover
, a new parking, car park 2, will be set up in the north east of the the
site
.
In addition
, a new road is going to be developed, which connects the west of the
site
to the east part, car park 2
in particular
. Furhtermore, the location of main entrance and car park 1 will not be altered.
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