Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there is a debate about the issue of crime punishment
whether
it should be fixed or should be decided Correct word choice
and whether
according to
the person
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person's
offense
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offence
Although
,
it is important to have fixed punishments as it enables the judges not to abuse Laws , I believe that considering different circumstances is vital because not all Remove the comma
apply
offenses
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offences
intension
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On the one hand, one of the reasons why fixing punishments for different crimes is crucial is Replace the word
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due to
the fact that it helps majesty not to take advantage of the laws. That is
to say, the majority of the judges use there
power in court and Replace the word
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over penalize
people who have committed simple Add a hyphen
over-penalize
offenses
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offences
This
not only leaves them devastated but also
depressed. Furthermore
, If all crime punishment is fixed, it will help people to know that they have been disciplined fairly. For instance
, research done at Makerere by professor
John shows that around 50% of the prisoners are being over Capitalize word
Professor
penalize
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penalised
However
, I think that so many factors have to be considered when deciding to penalize someone hence
penalizing must not be fixes
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be fixed
On the other hand
, despite the above point, I agree that officers should consider what a person has done wrong and the motive he or she had as some of
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apply
the
illegal acts are done Correct article usage
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accidently
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accidentally
In other words
, a greater number of members who are imprisoned have committed crimes unknowingly without being aware that it will turn into an offense
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offence
Moreover
, others break laws because of peer groups, trying to fit in a group but not with the aim of hurting others. As proof, a lot of Ugandan law breakers
are thrown into prison without putting into account what was their aim Correct your spelling
lawbreakers
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Therefore
, I agree that judges must consider so many things before disciplining.
In conclusion, even though fixing punishment
for each Add an article
the punishment
offense
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offence
avoids
officers from over abusing the law, I think that before poisoning people Verb problem
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long or small periods, a judge should consider what was the goal of doing so as some crimes are not Change preposition
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