The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

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The maps illustrate the transformation of Castellon

City

between 2000 and now.

Overall

, there was a significant increase in transportation

facilities

and entertainment

facilities

in the area. Starting with transportation

facilities

, there have been improvements in public transportation within the

city

Firstly

, the new train station has been moved near the

city

centre

while

bike rental has been added to the area.

Tramline

Correct article usage

A tramline

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has

also

been added which connects the

city

centre

and the university building in the northern part.

Furthermore

, the hall of residence and police station

has

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have

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been constructed in the northeast and east parts respectively.

Lastly

, the main road has been shifted to a pedestrian road. Turning to entertainment

facilities

, the old market in 2000 was reconstructed into the new shop today.

Also

, the new shopping

centre

, which previously had trees, and a covered market has been built in the western part of the

city

centre

where a new airport has been under construction in between those

facilities

. Near the coast and port area, the cinema and bars and clubs have been added.

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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media-rich society.

Financial education should be included as a mandatory subject in schools to prepare students for managing money effectively. Do you agree or disagree?

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People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba driving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.