The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

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The maps illustrate the transformation of Castellon

City

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between 2000 and now.

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, there was a significant increase in transportation

facilities

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and entertainment

facilities

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in the area. Starting with transportation

facilities

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, there have been improvements in public transportation within the

city

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Firstly

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, the new train station has been moved near the

city

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centre

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while

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bike rental has been added to the area.

Tramline

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A tramline

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has

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been added which connects the

city

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centre

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and the university building in the northern part.

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, the hall of residence and police station

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been constructed in the northeast and east parts respectively.

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, the main road has been shifted to a pedestrian road. Turning to entertainment

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, the old market in 2000 was reconstructed into the new shop today.

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, the new shopping

centre

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, which previously had trees, and a covered market has been built in the western part of the

city

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centre

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where a new airport has been under construction in between those

facilities

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. Near the coast and port area, the cinema and bars and clubs have been added.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, facilities, centre with synonyms.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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3 paragraphs

176 words

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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

Young people are often influenced in their behaviours and situations by others in the same age. This is called "peer pressure". Do the disadvantages of peer pressure outweigh the advantages?

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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