The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

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The maps illustrate the transformation of Castellon

City

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between 2000 and now.

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, there was a significant increase in transportation

facilities

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and entertainment

facilities

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in the area. Starting with transportation

facilities

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, there have been improvements in public transportation within the

city

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Firstly

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, the new train station has been moved near the

city

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centre

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while

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bike rental has been added to the area.

Tramline

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A tramline

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has

also

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been added which connects the

city

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centre

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and the university building in the northern part.

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, the hall of residence and police station

has

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been constructed in the northeast and east parts respectively.

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, the main road has been shifted to a pedestrian road. Turning to entertainment

facilities

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, the old market in 2000 was reconstructed into the new shop today.

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, the new shopping

centre

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, which previously had trees, and a covered market has been built in the western part of the

city

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centre

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where a new airport has been under construction in between those

facilities

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. Near the coast and port area, the cinema and bars and clubs have been added.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words city, facilities, centre with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

176 words

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The maps below show changes in the Spanish city of Castellon in recent times.

It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviours to children?

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?