The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.

The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.
The two charts
depicts
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information about the excuse and the main problem for
travel
.
Overall
, there are 5 reasons for going to
travel
and 6 problems
while
travelling public. Many
peoples
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going to
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travel
because of work and the biggest main
issues
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when travelling is the price of
travel
, either they get
the
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cheaper transportation or
inexpensive
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an inexpensive
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hotel. Looking in more detail, the unpopular excuse for going
travel
is
visit
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friends or relatives only 6%. The second around ten
percent
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is doing social activities or recreation.
Furthermore
shopping
clothes
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,
foods
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and other goods is the third reason for travelling. After that other excuses
is
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personal reasons at 19%. The
last
and the most reason for
travel
is to and from work, almost half
percent
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.
Next,
main
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issues for
travelling
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public
is
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dominated by the budget
of
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travel
for
accomodation
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accommodation
,
visa
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for going abroad and meals, at 36%.
Then
, around 19%
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of peoples
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peoples
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people
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choose safety concerns as the second
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.
Moreover
, highway congestion and access to public transport respectively less than a fifth.
However
, space for pedestrians
being
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the latest
issues
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with
a very small percentages
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a very small percentage
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.
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