The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.
The two charts
depicts
information about the excuse and the main problem for Change the verb form
depict
travel
. Overall
, there are 5 reasons for going to travel
and 6 problems while
travelling public. Many peoples
Fix the agreement mistake
people
going to
Verb problem
apply
travel
because of work and the biggest main issues
when travelling is the price of Fix the agreement mistake
issue
travel
, either they get the
cheaper transportation or Correct article usage
apply
inexpensive
hotel.
Looking in more detail, the unpopular excuse for going Correct article usage
an inexpensive
travel
is visit
friends or relatives only 6%. The second around ten Fix the infinitive
to visit
percent
is doing social activities or recreation. Change the spelling
per cent
Furthermore
shopping clothes
, Change preposition
for clothes
foods
and other goods is the third reason for travelling. After that other excuses Fix the agreement mistake
food
is
personal reasons at 19%. The Change the verb form
are
last
and the most reason for travel
is to and from work, almost half percent
.
Change the spelling
per cent
Next,
main
issues for Correct article usage
the main
travelling
public Add an article
the travelling
is
dominated by the budget Correct subject-verb agreement
are
of
Change preposition
for
travel
for accomodation
, Correct your spelling
accommodation
visa
for going abroad and meals, at 36%. Fix the agreement mistake
visas
Then
, around 19% Change preposition
of peoples
peoples
choose safety concerns as the second Fix the agreement mistake
people
problems
. Fix the agreement mistake
problem
Moreover
, highway congestion and access to public transport respectively less than a fifth. However
, space for pedestrians being
the latest Wrong verb form
is
issues
with Fix the agreement mistake
issue
a very small percentages
.Correct the article-noun agreement
a very small percentage
very small percentages
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