You recently organized a party for your company at a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter. -describe the party and how it went -explain why you were pleased with the hotel service. -suggest some improvements that the hotel could make
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing to express my gratitude for the excellent
service
provided by your Use synonyms
hotel
during our company's party held Use synonyms
last
on Linking Words
monday
. Your team was very wonderful. Change the capitalization
Monday
Moreover
would provide fast and quality Linking Words
service
.
The party was attended Use synonyms
around
one Change preposition
by around
employees
and their families and everyone had a fantastic time. The decorations, food, and drinks Change to a singular noun
employee
existent
. I was Replace the word
exist
particulary
pleased with the Correct your spelling
particularly
smoth
organization Correct your spelling
smooth
on
the event. I think, Change preposition
at
everyone
Correct your spelling
every
guests
Fix the agreement mistake
guest
were
satisfied with Correct subject-verb agreement
was
a
Correct article usage
the
service
. Of course, I am satisfied with the Use synonyms
service
. I would like to suggest a few improvements that could Use synonyms
further
enhance Linking Words
an
Correct article usage
apply
overall
the experience at your Linking Words
hotel
. Use synonyms
Firstly
, it would Linking Words
great
Add a missing verb
be great
the
Correct word choice
if the
hotel
could include discounted rates or added Use synonyms
service
tailored to Use synonyms
corpared
events.
Thank you once again for making our party a memorable one. Please convey our appreciation to your entire team for their hard work and dedication we will highly recommend your Correct your spelling
compare
compared
hotel
to others in Use synonyms
ours
business circle. The Correct the word
our
auther
of the letters is Tom Correct your spelling
author
that
"MI" company.Correct determiner usage
the
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Grammar
Be mindful of minor grammatical errors and misuses of words/phrases which can slightly disrupt the overall fluency.
Content Detail
Consider elaborating more on specific aspects that made the hotel service pleasing to reinforce your appreciation.
Clarity
For suggestions, aim to be more concise and direct to ensure clarity.
Structure
Your structure and paragraphing effectively convey your points, making the letter easy to follow.
Tone
You have appropriately used formal language and a suitable tone for the context, which enhances the overall impact of your letter.
Appreciation
The expression of gratitude and specific acknowledgment of the hotel's service strengthen your message of appreciation.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,