The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the average weekly spending by families in a country between 1968 and 2018.
Overall
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it is clear that
the percentage of primary needs Linking Words
such
as food, fuel and power, clothing and footwear, and personal goods experienced a decrease. Linking Words
In contrast
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the
secondary needs Correct article usage
apply
such
as housing, transport, and leisure Linking Words
had
increased throughout the period.
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To begin
with, the consumption of primary necessities fell for 50 years. Linking Words
For instance
, in 1968, food was the highest consumption at 35% of weekly income. Linking Words
However
, it drastically dropped to about 17%. Linking Words
Similarly
, clothing and footwear had significantly declined from 10% to 5%, followed by personal goods, fuel and power, which spent under 5% Linking Words
at the end
of the period.
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Conversely
, the secondary needs depict a growing trend. Linking Words
Firstly
, the families only spent their money on leisure at 9%, and they raised the budget to 22% in 2018. Linking Words
Subsequently
, many people preferred to buy a house, showing an increased percentage from 10% to almost 20%, followed by transport, which had slightly climbed from 8% to 14%. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the average weekly earnings for household goods remained steady at about 8% from 1968 to 2018.Linking Words
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