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Despite health warnings, a large number of people continue to smoke all over the world. Why should we be concerned about this? What solutions would you suggest?

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Smoking is one of many bad habits that contribute to the worsening of
people
`s
health
 conditions
overall
. With other negative factors influencing our
health
, we should be more interested in
this
 problem. Smoking is a widespread activity since tobacco exists. It is said,
it
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that it
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 brings
people
 many pleasant feelings,
for instance
, relaxation feelings, suppression of hunger, or ,
according to
 some sources, smoking is elegibly able to reduce stress.
On the other hand
, the most disturbing thing is
steadily
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the steadily
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 declining age of beginner
smokers
. At the moment, it is not rare to see smoking groups of adolescents. Generally speaking , the number of
smokers
 is increasing all over the world, with increasing
health
 risks ,
such
 as early lung cancer , stroke or heart attack.
However
, we have to handle
this
 problem as soon as possible. I can see the solution in enlightenment. It might be helpful to show
people
 the particular cases of
smokers
 who were not so lucky to stay healthy. They should share their
health care
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healthcare
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 experience with other
smokers
, and help with
presentation
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the presentation
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 of negative consequences.
Moreover
, it is necessary to provide
people
 with some substitution for
this
 bad habit. It can help to support them in exercise activities and other hobbies which can supply smoking.
To conclude
, smoking is
dangerous
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a dangerous
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 hobby for many
people
, and especially for children which does not bring us anything good.
Unfortunately
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Unfortunately,
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 we can observe
increasing
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the increasing
an increasing
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 trend of smoking in the world. It is alarming , and we have to actively fight against
this
 bad habit and support all who
wants
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want
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 to finish it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Addiction
  • Cardiovascular disease
  • Chronic obstructive pulmonary disease (COPD)
  • Nicotine
  • Public health initiative
  • Secondhand smoke
  • Substance abuse
  • Tobacco cessation
  • Environmental degradation
  • Social norms
  • Healthcare burden
  • Preventive measures
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