The graph below shows different sources of air pollutants in the UK from 1990 to 2005. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make
The graph presents different information
of
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on
air
pollutants in the UK over a six-year period between 1990 and 2005 through four major sources.
Overall
, the graph totally reveals that the total air
pollutants, an industry, where air
pollution from, continually decreased. While
households reduced but it was
increased Unnecessary verb
apply
in
1996 to 1999 Change preposition
from
then
consistently downward again in 1996. In contrast
, the transport seemed like slowly
upward trend.
In regard to the total Add an article
a slowly
the slowly
air
pollutants, in 1990 there was
7 Change the verb form
were
million
tonnes
of the
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apply
air
pollution. This
figure reduced relatively stable until 1999 when there were 4 million
tonnes
. Then
there was slowly dropped in three years till 2002 there was
only 3.9 Change the verb form
were
million
tonnes
. After that time there was quickly downward again to 3 million
tonnes
in 2005.
However
, if we look at the transport sources, it seemed gradually increasing, while
the other three sources saw reducing
. Another interesting point is that the transport fountainhead Wrong verb form
a reduction
was go
down in 1996. After that three years later, it increased carefully Wrong verb form
went
under
2 Change preposition
to under
million
tonne
.Fix the agreement mistake
tonnes
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