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The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish

The diagram below shows the process of producing smoked fish
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The diagram gives information about the process of manufacturing smoked
fish
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Overall
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, there are thirteen steps in the production of smoked
fish
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, with
the first step is
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 to catch
fish
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 in the water and the end of the process is the finished
fish
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 product sold at the shop. First of all,
fish
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 are caught in the nets out at sea or river,
then
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 they are transported by boat back to the port. Once at the port, the
fish
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 are stored and frozen. Following that, the chosen
fish
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 are thawed and put in fresh water. In the next step, they are cut open, and soaked in salt water and yellow colouring for flavouring. After that, the number of
fish
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 is smoked and packaged into boxes and
then
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 frozen at zero degrees Celsius to preserve their taste and freshness.
Lastly
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, in order to distribute the complete products, the
fish
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 boxes are kept in cold storage and delivered by trucks to
fish
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 shops for
selling
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sale
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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