The graph below shows the global demand for different textile fibers between 1980 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graph illustrates data about the demands for four different types of textile
fibers
all over the world, over a 35-year period between 1980 and 2015.
Change the spelling
fibres
Overall
, what stands out from the chart is that the request for various kinds of textile fibers
Change the spelling
fibres
was
increased considerably during the period shown. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the demand for Polysester
and Cotton experienced a remarkable rise, Correct your spelling
polyester
the
figures for Cellulosic and Wool remained almost stable.
In 1980, Cotton was the most popular type of textile Correct word choice
and the
fibers
with around 12 million tons of Change the spelling
fibres
sells
, Replace the word
sales
while
Polyester was the next popular item with almost just half of this
amount. The figures for Cellulosic and Wool was
by far less, at approximately 3 and 1 million tonnes, respectively.
Correct subject-verb agreement
were
Following
this
, the global demands
for Polyester increased sharply in the coming years, overtaking Fix the agreement mistake
demand
the
Cotton in 1995, and Correct article usage
apply
then
reaching to
just under 70 million tonnes in 2015, Change preposition
apply
this
figure being the peak level of requests during the whole period. Regarding the worldwide asks for Wool, it remained stable with a negligible amount, in contrast
to Cellulosic, which rose gradually in the last
15 years.Submitted by TUTOO on
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stable" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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