The chart below shows the percentage of households owning four types of electronic devices between 1995 and 2015.
The chart shows information about the percentage of households with four kinds of electronic devices
such
as MP3 players, mobile phones, computers, and tablets between 1995 and 2015. As can be seen from the chart, it is obvious that all the electronic gadgets increased year
on year
and started at a similar point apart from tablets.
In detail, there was a dramatic increase in mobile phones, from under 10 to 70 per cent
within 5 years, and the figure gradually rose, with approximately 95 per cent
in the last
year
. As for MP3 players slowly grew, with 6 per cent
year
on year
, and ended at 30 per cent
, or amount for twice as starting point.
Looking at the details, there is a continuing increase in computers which started and ended at the same point as mobile phones. Tablet started in 2003 with 0 per cent
, grew with estimated 18 per cent
, considerably rose to 61 per cent
, and then
increased to 80 per cent
in last
year
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