A magazine wants to include conservations from its readers for an article called the book that influenced me most Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that employs your must. In your letter Describe what this book was about Explain how this book influenced you Say whether this book would be likely to influence other people
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to tell you about an article from book
it Add an article
the book
a book
is
influenced me more. As you know the writer kind of Verb problem
has
place
some Fix the agreement mistake
places
order
in his Fix the agreement mistake
orders
book
, and the famous book
is called Poldark this
book
talked
about Wrong verb form
talks
magnificent
model of Correct article usage
a magnificent
soldier
his name was Poldark, Correct article usage
a soldier
while
he is
struggling in the Wrong verb form
was
exhausted
war and how did he keen in that period.
I want to explain how Replace the word
exhausting
this
book
has pretty
impact Add an article
the pretty
a pretty
of
us. Change preposition
on
As well as
, the men in the huge war Rephrase
Also
have
face some obstacles and they are Unnecessary verb
apply
front
of the deathChange preposition
in front
,
when they are coming from the enemies, that Remove the comma
apply
book
taught us how we deal with them to help them if they came
back.
I was wondering if there would be at all possible two Wrong verb form
come
assistant
Change to a plural noun
assistants
them
when we hold up their picture on the wall, we put all reminiscence Correct pronoun usage
apply
then
and it will make us feel nostalgic for them. In addition
, the government applies appreciate
for them by drawing them on the walls put a stop I thank you for your consideration.
Best regards,
MonirahReplace the word
appreciation
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph presents a clear and distinct idea, with appropriate supporting details and examples.
coherence cohesion
Develop logical, clear transitions between paragraphs to enhance the flow of the letter.
task achievement
Carefully read the task instructions and respond to all parts of the prompt. Your letter should describe the book, explain its influence on you, and consider its potential influence on others.
task achievement
Maintain a tone that is suitable for the intended reader and consistent throughout your piece. It should be formal and respectful, as it is directed to the editor of a magazine.
