In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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among various nations all over the world has experienced significant improvement by assisting plain and remount communications about one hundred years ago.

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some demerits can be mentioned for

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, I think merits can overshadow the negative

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. On the one hand, I concede that using

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and telecommunication has played an important role in

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within the world ranging from export,

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in emergency situations, etc.

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, the benefit of aeroplanes is said to be utterly costly especially

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among countries or continents. Apart from that, controlling aeroplanes needs an expert pilot and if the pilot were not professional, several dangerous conditions would occur.

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, telecommunications needs special equipment which requires an expert engineer who they not only able to send messages accurately but

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prevent misunderstanding. All of these may need cost and knowledge.

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, I think

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development is worth

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expense.

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, by finding

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as a way of

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with other associations,new cultural aspects are introduced that not only cause exchange culture and related issues

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but

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bring an opportunity to use positive

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of different cultures.

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,the great beneficial

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of

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travelling may be its fast speed and safe

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, many years ago, people had to

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by camels or after a

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, by car. Their

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might

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too long and

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, they were not able to

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too far since it took a long time.

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, they discourage travelling. But in the 20th century, everything , especially travelling, has developed and now people are usually able to

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by

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plain or send their messages and information readily and accurately. In my opinion, the positive

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of

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and remount connections outweigh its negative aspects. In conclusion,

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it is argued that travelling by aeroplane or helicopter may have some disadvantages

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as its cost and needing equipment and expert individuals, I wholeheartedly believe that

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its benefit for providing the chance to exchange culture that causes globalization, and

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, it is fast and safe messaging which might be a great beneficial point, positives overcome its negatives.