In the 20th century, contact between many different parts of the world has developed rapidly through air travel and telecommunications. Do advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Communication

among various nations all over the world has experienced significant improvement by assisting plain and remount communications about one hundred years ago.

While

some demerits can be mentioned for

this

, I think merits can overshadow the negative

points

. On the one hand, I concede that using

aeroplane

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and telecommunication has played an important role in

communication

within the world ranging from export,

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in emergency situations, etc.

However

, the benefit of aeroplanes is said to be utterly costly especially

travelling

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among countries or continents. Apart from that, controlling aeroplanes needs an expert pilot and if the pilot were not professional, several dangerous conditions would occur.

Furthermore

, telecommunications needs special equipment which requires an expert engineer who they not only able to send messages accurately but

also

prevent misunderstanding. All of these may need cost and knowledge.

However

, I think

this

development is worth

this

expense.

On the other hand

, by finding

air

as a way of

communication

with other associations,new cultural aspects are introduced that not only cause exchange culture and related issues

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but

also

bring an opportunity to use positive

points

of different cultures.

Moreover

,the great beneficial

points

of

air

travelling may be its fast speed and safe

communication

.

For example

, many years ago, people had to

travel

by camels or after a

while

, by car. Their

travel

might

last

too long and

also

, they were not able to

travel

too far since it took a long time.

As a result

, they discourage travelling. But in the 20th century, everything , especially travelling, has developed and now people are usually able to

travel

by

air

plain or send their messages and information readily and accurately. In my opinion, the positive

points

of

air

travel

and remount connections outweigh its negative aspects. In conclusion,

Although

it is argued that travelling by aeroplane or helicopter may have some disadvantages

such

as its cost and needing equipment and expert individuals, I wholeheartedly believe that

due to

its benefit for providing the chance to exchange culture that causes globalization, and

also

, it is fast and safe messaging which might be a great beneficial point, positives overcome its negatives.