The graph shows the hours spent in different study methods during a two year course
The graph below illustrates time taken in the learning methods which are
internet
, library,lectures and Correct article usage
the internet
classes
during a two year
course.
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two-year
Overall
, the hours
that were spent studying using the internet
rose dramatically whilst,the time that was used for learning through lecturers and Capitalize word
Internet
classes
dropped moderately.
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Nonetheless
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via
internet
rose swiftly and it Capitalize word
Internet
also
remained constant but hours
used attending lecturers and classes
remained the same.
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the time taken Change preposition
in
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acquiring
lecturers
and Correct your spelling
lectures
classes
as well as
going to library
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the library
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However,
hours
spent on the internet
rose swiftly in the second year.Capitalize word
Internet
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