In some countries today, people are having their first child when they are older. What are the reasons for this? Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, most
of
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apply
the
people think that Correct article usage
apply
first
Correct article usage
the first
child
should come the their family in when they are mature Use synonyms
old
. Correct word choice
and old
This
idea has become Linking Words
spreaded
in all over the world and it has Correct your spelling
spread
bring
along some negative and positive situations. I partly agree with Change the verb form
brought
this
opinion and I will explain my perspective with some Linking Words
example
and more details.
First and foremost, in modern times, many Fix the agreement mistake
examples
women
work all their lives and start their Use synonyms
career
at an early age. These Fix the agreement mistake
careers
women
do not want things which are Use synonyms
obstacle
Fix the agreement mistake
obstacles
for
their career and Change preposition
to
life
balance. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, they think Linking Words
about
that, having a Change preposition
apply
baby
is significantly responsible and Use synonyms
require
interest during all Correct subject-verb agreement
requires
life
Use synonyms
for
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this
reason the Linking Words
women
postpone Use synonyms
this
idea and they consider that the correct time is approximately Linking Words
thirtyfive
or forty years old for Correct your spelling
thirty-five
thirty five
have
a infant. Wrong verb form
having
However
, Linking Words
this
opinion show a like true, it Linking Words
have
considerable problems Change the verb form
has
such
as Linking Words
generation
gap, old Correct article usage
the generation
mother
body problems, Change noun form
mother's
low
patience Correct word choice
and low
for
parents. These issues can not Change preposition
among
repair
after birth. Wrong verb form
be repaired
For example
, a mother who has her first Linking Words
child
at the age of forty cannot do Use synonyms
this
activity with her Linking Words
child
15 years later because she will complain of muscle pains when her Use synonyms
child
wants to ride a bicycle with her, and the absence of these activities that will benefit the Use synonyms
child
's development creates a sad result for both of them.
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On the other hand
, parents who have a late Linking Words
baby
may be more caring towards their children. Use synonyms
This
is because they have already reached the career step they have targeted in their working Linking Words
life
and have more time to spare for their children. Use synonyms
For instance
, Linking Words
according to
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conducted
by Cyprus University poll, it has been found that Verb problem
apply
women
who become mothers later in Use synonyms
life
feel more financially comfortable and are much more grateful and happy when they have a Use synonyms
baby
.
In conclusion, being a late parent has some advantages Use synonyms
as well as
disadvantages. Linking Words
Although
it is very difficult to decide when the right timeLinking Words
, in
my opinion, both parents should have a Add a missing verb
is, in
baby
when they are mature enough to be responsible, not later or earlier.Use synonyms
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