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The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make a comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate how the Central
Library
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 has been changed from 20 years ago until now. It is clearly seen that all parts of
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 have experienced notable alterations and some places have been facilitated.
According to
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 the top of the map, the children's
books
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room
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 on the top-right corner of the
library
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 is converted to the lecture
room
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,
while
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 children's fiction
books
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 are located in a place which used to be a section for CDs, videos and computer games in the past. Two sofas,
moreover
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, are added to
this
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room
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 where storytelling events take place. On the bottom of the map, 20 years ago, the reading
room
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 was in the bottom-left corner of the
library
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 and now the computer
room
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 is created there.
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, a cafe is built where used to be an enquiry desk. Looking more closely at the middle of the
library
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, the
adult
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 non-fiction
books
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 have been replaced with the
adult
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 fiction
books
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 part which is now facilitated with the self-service machines and an information desk.
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, the
adult
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 fiction
books
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 located on the opposite of the
adult
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 non-fiction
books
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 have been altered to a place for keeping reference
books
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. Tables and chairs,
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, have been removed.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, books, room, adult with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • layout
  • modern technology
  • computer stations
  • multimedia room
  • multi-purpose spaces
  • conference rooms
  • study spaces
  • community-oriented services
  • accessibility
  • wider aisles
  • ramps
  • designated areas
  • people with disabilities
  • cafeteria
  • coffee shop
  • leisurely space
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