The charts show the main methodof transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009

The charts show the main methodof transport of people travelling to one university in 2004 and 2009
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The two pie charts illustrate how people used five different types of transport methods in a particular university in
percentage wise
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from 2004 to 2009.
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, at the beginning of the period, the most popular transport method was
a
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car
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, but the figure decreased after
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the parking charges.
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to that,
bus
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usage was increased after the new
bus
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stop was established on the university premises. In 2004, the
car
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was the most significant type of transport accounting for just over a half and, the
bus
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was chosen as the second favourite travel type among the university crowd. It was 33%. The least amount of individuals were used the train to go to their destination was 3%.
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of the period, new
bus
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stop
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encouraged people to use buses and the rate went up to 46% when compared to 2004.
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car
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's popularity declined to almost half with
a
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car
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parking charges to 28%.
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, bicycles
was
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becoming
popular
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than in 2004 accounting for 16%.
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, walking and train figures were reported as a tiny fraction with a slight growth to 6% and 4% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, bus with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • method of transport
  • comparison
  • increase
  • decrease
  • cars
  • bicycles
  • walking
  • public transport
  • popular choice
  • reasons
  • changes
  • infrastructure improvements
  • impact
  • transport choices
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