The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different part of the world.

The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in different part of the world.
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The graph shows how many international
tourists
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arrived in some different places of the World during 16 years, namely from 1990 to 2005.
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of
tourists
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who visited Central and Eastern Europe increased drastically over the 16 years. At the same time, arrivals
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in South America was moderate with a smaller
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of
tourists
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in comparison with all other graphs. Despite the modest
growth
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, the USA presented the biggest
number
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of
tourists
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who arrived during those 16 years. The
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of arrivals in Central and Eastern Europe skyrocketed roughly triple times from approximately 31
million
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people to 87
million
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from 1990 to 2005 respectively. The
growth
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of the tourist's
number
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who came to South America
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showed figures of roughly 7 at the very beginning and 16
million
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people in 2005. The USA, despite of the
growth
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only 30% showed the biggest
number
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of arrived
tourists
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, namely close to 89
million
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.
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