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The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.

The three charts below show the value in Australian dollars of Australian trade with three different countries from 2004 to 2009.
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The line graphs compare the total expenditure and
revenue
 on trading activities between Australia, China, Japan, and
United
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the United
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 States for five consecutive years.
Overall
, Australia had the highest
revenue
 from its transaction with Japan,
meanwhile
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meanwhile,
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 the highest expenses came from the imported commodities from the United States. In 2004,
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the Australia
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Australia
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Australian
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 government allocated around 18
billion
 A$ for importing goods from China,
while
received
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receiving
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 in return for about 12
billion
 A$ through selling their goods to China. The number gradually increased, until in 2008 crossed
the
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a
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 similar amount
for
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of
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 30
billion
 A$ just before the expenses for imported things
went
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apply
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plateau
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plateaued
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 and the income from exported things surpassed it in the following year.
On the other hand
, the
revenue
 from exporting commodities to Japan
valued
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is valued
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in
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at
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 more than 20
billion
 A$ which
in
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is
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 the same number allocated by the Australian government to buy products from the United States. The export activity
revenue
 and import activity expenditure for both countries gradually increased and
similarly
 reached
its
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their
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 peak in 2008
for
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at
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 45
billion
 A$ and 25
billion
 A$ respectively before
decline
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declining
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 in 2009.
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