The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*- labelled coffee and bananas in 1994 and 2004 in five European countries.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*- labelled coffee and bananas in 1994 and 2004 in five European countries.
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the
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of
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coffee and bananas in five different countries (UK,
Switzerland
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,
Denmark
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,
Sweden
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and
Beligium
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Belgium
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, it is clearly apparent that coffee
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always increased in
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of 5 years,
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the demand for bananas in some
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countries
namely
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and
Denmark
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had a downward tendency. Turning to the details,
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switzerland
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was the
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in
Coffee
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the Coffee
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fairtrade
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with
total
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amount of 3
million
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in 1999, but it got replaced by
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that
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make
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up 20
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sales
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in 2004. In a given period,
Denmark
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and
Sweden
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had equal
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of
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sales
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roughly about 0.2
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. Moving to the second table, it experience different
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. In 1999
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constitute15
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of bananas
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and in 2004 it
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47
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.
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is the highest country in banana
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.
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, UK and Belgium
consitutively
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constitutively
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right behind.
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,
Sweden
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and
Denmark
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sales
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went down noticeably. Belgium had a drop
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0.8
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compared to 1999, and
Denmark
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had a fall
about
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1
million
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euros.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, switzerland, denmark, sweden, million with synonyms.
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