the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
The line graph displays the figure of visitors to a Caribbean
Island
from 2010 to 2017 based on their place of stay.
Overall
, the total of tourists visiting the
island
continued to increase over the period.
However
, there was a change in the number of people staying on cruise ships and on the
island
. Even though the number of people staying on a ship started lower, it steadily grew and surpassed the number of visitors that stayed on the
island
.
Island
-staying visitors started at around 0.7
million
in 2010, and gradually went up to 1,5
million
from 2013 to 2015, before fluctuating to about 1,3
million
in 2016 and going back to 1.5
million
in 2017.
On the contrary
, staying on cruise ships started lower in 2010 by roughly 0.3
million
.
This
changed from 2013 to 2017, and the graph substantially inclined until it reached 2
million
in 2017. The surpassing point can be seen in around half of 2015.
Although
the statistics between the two choices changed, the total sum of tourists rose steadily. It began with only 1
million
in 2010 to 3.5
million
in 201, even though there was a plateau from 2015 to 2016 by more or less 2.7
million
.
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