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the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.

the graph below shows the number of tourist visiting a particular Caribbean Island between 2010 and 2017.
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The line graph displays the figure of visitors to a Caribbean
Island
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 from 2010 to 2017 based on their place of stay.
Overall
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, the total of tourists visiting the
island
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 continued to increase over the period.
However
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, there was a change in the number of people staying on cruise ships and on the
island
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. Even though the number of people staying on a ship started lower, it steadily grew and surpassed the number of visitors that stayed on the
island
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.
Island
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-staying visitors started at around 0.7
million
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 in 2010, and gradually went up to 1,5
million
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 from 2013 to 2015, before fluctuating to about 1,3
million
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 in 2016 and going back to 1.5
million
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 in 2017.
On the contrary
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, staying on cruise ships started lower in 2010 by roughly 0.3
million
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.
This
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 changed from 2013 to 2017, and the graph substantially inclined until it reached 2
million
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 in 2017. The surpassing point can be seen in around half of 2015.
Although
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 the statistics between the two choices changed, the total sum of tourists rose steadily. It began with only 1
million
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 in 2010 to 3.5
million
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 in 201, even though there was a plateau from 2015 to 2016 by more or less 2.7
million
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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