The diagram below shows how rocks are created and destroyed in the rock cycle
The diagram delineates the detailed stages of
Use synonyms
rock
cycle, including the establishment of a Add an article
the rock
rock
Use synonyms
along with
the process of its destruction. Looking from a holistic perspective, the variety of rocks Linking Words
consist
of three kinds, Correct subject-verb agreement
consists
such
as sedimentary Linking Words
rock
, metamorphic Use synonyms
rock
, and igneous Use synonyms
rock
. The base source of Use synonyms
that
three Correct determiner usage
those
category
of rocks is from the natural onset, Change to a plural noun
categories
such
as eruption and rain.
In the beginning, when the rain falls into the top of the mountain, it will cause erosion. The erosion phenomenon will lead the sand and stones to descend into the lower area below the sea surface and Linking Words
formed
sediment. Replace the word
form
This
sediment is the base material for sedimentary Linking Words
rock
to emerge. In the subsequent phase, if the surrounding area experiences high pressure and temperature, it will cause the sedimentary Use synonyms
rock
to create metamorphic Use synonyms
rock
. Use synonyms
This
metamorphic Linking Words
rock
which Use synonyms
exposed
to the melting process will fuse with the Add a missing verb
is exposed
magma
.
The initial process of eruption is started by the elevation of the Use synonyms
magma
and Use synonyms
ended
with the explosion of little Wrong verb form
ends
fragment
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fragments
to
the air, called lava. The lava on the surface of the mountain, Change preposition
into
along with
the Linking Words
magma
which still trapped inside will quickly turn into low temperature. Use synonyms
That
cold temperature of lava and Correct determiner usage
The
magma
are the source of igneous Use synonyms
rock
to form. Use synonyms
Lastly
, all Linking Words
those
three kinds of rocks will ascend quickly to the surface of the mountain and the cycle Correct determiner usage
apply
continue
.Correct subject-verb agreement
continues
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