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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business, and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss bothe these views and give your opinion.

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In recent times, a plethora of
information
 is available in many realms
such
 as research,
coorporations
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corporations
, and education. Under the
circumstance
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, there is ongoing contention whether all of the
information
 stored or discovered in the fields should be shared with the public as freely as possible.
This
 essay will argue both
prons
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pros
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 and cons regarding the issue before coming to a conclusion that there should be a certain level of limit on sharing
information
.
To begin
 with, general citizens will significantly benefit by accessing any type of
information
 shared by these parties.
For instance
, if people were to be able to obtain confidential
information
such
 as creating a healthy drink,
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devising a ground-breaking technology,
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or an
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 application, they would be instantly successful
at
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in
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 the field.
Furthermore
, they could leverage those resources to either make revenues or integrate them into their lives more efficiently.
Hence
, sharing
information
 will
lead
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 people’s lives
to
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far more practical,
convenient
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and convenient
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 and unlock their
potentials
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potential
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.
On the contrary
, I assert that there would be two serious potential risks involved in
this
implimentation
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implementation
, one of which is to undervalue the efforts of
researchers’
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researchers
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 and business owners’. Take researchers
for example
, they would invest a substantial amount of time and
efforts
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effort
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 in order to uncover new insights. If they were easily available to the public, not only would they feel
dimotivated
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motivated
demotivated
 to do any
further
 research, but the
information
 would be always
risk
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a risk
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 at an intellectual theft.
Moreover
, in a business setting, in which tough
competion
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competition
 is commonly prevalent, confidentiality is of paramount importance to maintain their status.
Thus
, considering their efforts, perseverance, and confidentiality of
information
, it is essential to put some limits on access to
information
. In conclusion,
while
 there is a high likelihood that
availability
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 of
information
 without any limits
enhance
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enhances
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 the quality of life among general people, I believe that we need to ensure
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the commitments
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 and status of those who have invented and discovered by making a consistent effort.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear central idea supported by relevant explanations or examples. Additionally, maintain a consistent tense and viewpoint throughout the essay to establish coherence.
task achievement
While you present both views, develop the arguments further with more specific and detailed examples. This will enhance the depth and clarity of your ideas, contributing to a more comprehensive response to the task.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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